100 wc week #7


The Competition 


 I shivered as I put on my shimmery lavender costume.Lighting thundered though my dressing room.  I was absolutely nervous. Sweat drips down my back as I opened the door to the Infinity Ice Rink. I  skated to the center and into my position. Calm, quiet music played as I started my routine.  I started my routine by skating gracefully in circles. I felt weightless! I continued my routine with graceful leaps and classic spins, while the audience cheers and claps. I ended my routine with a leap and a double spin. I bowed and  skidded off the rink. As the door slammed, I knew I was going to win this competition.

Comments

  1. Unknown27 October 2017 at 11:50

    A great idea on how to use the prompt this week. The middle and end of your story are really well written. The fist line is confusing to me. I think your story would be better if you started with your second sentence. Missing a space before the last sentence starts. Infinity Ice Rink is the name of the arena and should be capitalized.

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

100 wc week #14

My Fantastic Idea  English class was my least favorite class because we had to write a lot of essays.This time our topic was about motion, which was so boring. It was due tomorrow and I have no idea what to write about. Glancing at our Monkey cage, I hurried to fed him, and that's when it hit me, Monkeys are intelligent, what if he could do my homework so I couldn't have to do it after dinner. Dashing to my room, I grabbed my laptop and pushed it towards the monkey. But he just yanked the laptop and pushes it off the table. I guess Monkeys are not capable with homework.
Read more

100 wc week # 21

The Magic Seeds My grandmother has a really green thump and loves to grow things, so before she died, she gave me these lush, aquamarine seeds that gave a luminous sparkle when I held it up to the sun. She told me to plant them on March twenty-first in the garden and then someting magical will happen. I did as she told and on March twenty- first, I sprinted to the graden and planted the seeds one by one. Right when the seeds brushed the ground, I saw many trees sprouting and they moved towards me, I saw many of my ancestors in tree form who died and one was my grandmother . . . . .
Read more

100 wc week #19

The Creepy doll   Lightning thunder outside my room which made shadows dance on the walls. I shivered and pulled  my blanket over my head. Ever since my family moved here I always felt like this place was haunted because it's antique and filthy with cobwebs everywhere. Spiders surrounding the our bedrooms and the rats, they were worse, one time I saw a rat climbed up the roof and it came down the drain pipe. Another tremendous bolt of lightning thunder outside. Suddenly, I heard a ear-splitting creaking sound coming from my door and that's then I saw a doll with blood red eyes, holding a heavy, iron knife.
Read more