100 wc week #8
The Summer Olympics
Japan in Tokyo, was where this Summer Olympics start this year. I was enthusiastic! The last Summer Olympics was celebrated in Brazil Rio.
Special athletes travel up and lighted the torch. Elegant red red flames sparked in the air. People watched as the white and red flag of Japan rise up on the flagpole. Speeches were given as people of all different countries entered the ceremony.
At the end of the celebration,everybody exited the stadium. Tomorrow, swimming was the first tournament. I was thrilled, because I am one of the athletes in swimming.
A great idea for a story that uses the word prompts this week. Your opening line could be stronger to help grab the readers attention. I like how you place yourself into the story at the end.
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