100 wc week #13
The Legendary Green Tiger
Firecrackers boomed though the streets of China. Chinese New Year had arrived and the whole village was celebrating from lighting firecrackers to watching the traditional Dragon Dance.
Suddenly I heard a growl coming from nowhere. It was the Green Tiger. Legend has it that with a flick of an eye the Green Tiger can send poison straight into your bloodstream. The Green Tiger pounced towards carts of fruit and vegetables, making the villagers scream as loud as a fire alarm ranging off. Villagers ran the opposite side of the Green Tiger, but the tiger was blocking our
escape. . . . .
Great opening sentences. You have really set the scene with the choice of words you used. After suddenly you would have a comma. Also good use of short and long sentences to add variety. Keep it up.
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